Thursday, August 26, 2010

Cross Country

On the twentieth of August the whole of Point England School had our school cross country. It was on the top field next to the Reserve.


Before the race began I was feeling nervous as we were clumped together in our age lines. Suddenly the clappers banged. We charged off down the field. I left people behind me during the race, I tried not to stop so I didn’t.


When I came out the gate I could feel the lumpy mud stuck in between my toes and it was squashy, slimy and also smelly. Have you ever had cross country at your school before? At the finish I felt so thirsty and happy that I came fourth. Finally cross country was over.

Wednesday, August 18, 2010

Jesse Martin Storm



Jesse Martin Storm
The violent wind whipped spray off thew sea, slapping Jesse Martin’s face like an angry lady. His hands were so numb, he couldn’t feel any thing. As the strong wind was blowing his face he was trying to walked to the bow but unfortunately he had stumbled. So he almost tripped over board.

As Jesse was grinding the winch the wind was howling in front of his boat. When the wind was howling his face was freezing cold. With a heavy heart the wind held and started to push and push hard onto his boat and nearly tipped him overboard. when the wind nearly blow Jesse overboard so he yelled out so loud so the wind got calm.